Wall Text Revision: Activity

The current version of the wall text contained two diary entries one from a time in the 1990s where I was commuting to Europe to work for the first time and a second entry dated from around the start of my journey to consider Brexit.

Though recent impasse within government and events of the last week have led me to consider revising the strategy to reflect recent changes.

My revised strategy is to break the text into smaller segments representing different dates in the Brexit timeline aligned to points along the journey from Tilbury to Harwich. This approach allows me to revised the text and include information that covers recent events.

The initial revision has split the text into three sections though it leaves the middle section significantly longer than the other two. Splitting the middle section into at least two diary entries could provide a more balanced presentation without loosing meaning.

Revised Exhibition Wall Text, July 2018

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